| 2011-12-18 16:28:58 |
My Four sisters.
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One thing that bugs me about these kinds of stories is that the protagonist is always such a Gary Stu. It's even worse because I guess your name is David and all of your stories' protagonists are called David and it's just such a clear case of being the greatest freaking Gary Stu in the world. So... please try to do better next time. |
| 2012-01-08 20:03:52 |
Coping with Retirement, part 1 - I Build It, and a Girl Comes
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Very nice. Definitely one of the better stories I've read in ages. |
| 2012-01-08 20:25:21 |
Coping with Retirement, part 2 - It's Like the Good Old Days
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Another nice one. I do like this series quite a lot :) |
| 2012-03-07 19:16:17 |
Emma's Big Night
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Good story. Can't wait for the sequel :) |
| 2012-12-24 21:09:23 |
Daddy's Mistresses
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This story is juvinile. The characters are all dumber than a sack of bricks. The psychology is stupid beyond hell. |