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Comments from Fix'm
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2011-04-15 04:54:44 | Fifteen | Good story that shows some great imagination, but as another commenter say don't make him into a creep. I really like s/f and would like to see more in this series. - THX Fix'm |
| 2011-04-15 04:54:45 | Fifteen | Good story that shows some great imagination, but as another commenter say don't make him into a creep. I really like s/f and would like to see more in this series. - THX Fix'm |
| 2011-04-15 05:16:17 | My Mind Control Gift | Great story with lots of imagination - More please. - THX Fix'm |
| 2011-04-15 06:27:33 | Excellent story and as another commenter said this story could easily be published were you so inclined.- THX Fix'm |
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| 2011-04-17 19:52:56 | Birthday sex - re written due to poor spelling | Your lack of paragraphing really detracts from this story as does your lack of punctuation and capitalization. It has promise, but it still needs work. PS: the book is titled the Kama Sutra, not the karma sutra. |