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Comments from Fix'm
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-04-24 11:17:16 | Exotic Erotic | To be honest I wasn't all that impressed. Just a straight suck and fuck theme with pretty basic character development. Maybe a 4/10 |
| 2011-04-25 04:04:04 | My Neighbors Secret CHAPTER 1 | The story definitely has potential, however you really need to work on your capitalization as that is a bit of a turn off. The same can be said of your use of paragraphs. I definitely want to see more, but only if you correct some of the above - THX Fix'm |
| 2011-04-25 04:21:16 | My first rape_(0) | SP - I feel sorry for the whiners and complainers who evidently don't know what really happens in life. Knew a woman like this Jeanne who was always giving people a ration of shit about the failures in their lives and was always cutting people down. Then, almost overnight, her whole attitude changed and she actually became a more pleasant individual. I asked a buddy in the neighborhood what had happened and he related a story similar to yours where she pushed some guy too far and he raped the shit out of her. He never said who had done it but I noticed that she seemed to be a lot nicer to him and his son after that. Keep them coming and fuck those pissant critics - THX Fix'm |
| 2011-04-25 04:30:04 | Allie's First Anal Sex | Great Story SP. Looking forward to your next one - THX Fix'm |
| 2011-04-26 17:28:07 | Zombie Holocaust 2 | After reading the first story I thought that this fledgling series had potential, but after reading the second I have to admit that I was wrong. Oh the idea of survival in a post apocalyptic word inhabited by humans and those mutated by a horrible virus has potential, but given the direction the author is taking this one - well if that's what it takes to blow your dress up by all means continue reading the series. Rape, violence, and humiliation all have their place in a story and can be used to further the development of a particular character or to move a story along in a certain direction, however gratuitous violence/rape/torture/slavery/humiliation simply because you can shows, IMO, a serious lack of creativity and is a major turn off 1/10 - THX Fix'm |