| 2012-04-27 21:49:10 |
Becoming a Madam Part 1
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Really good start, kinda short though? |
| 2012-09-15 22:41:03 |
Training Rose Pts 1-8
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What a weird world you live in Angie, I almost believed in it myself, can't wait to read more of your stories. |
| 2013-01-09 11:04:47 |
Lord Marchington's Staff
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So what is so wrong with it? |
| 2014-05-22 21:51:54 |
Company Slave Girl
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A great concept especially as the girl isn't harmed, how does it progress? |
| 2015-08-14 12:47:51 |
Who just fucked me?
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Same problem I have, you don't get it proof read, cumin and the girlfriend/daughter mistake for instance. On the plus side it is not an examination piece, at least you wouldn't get away with it in England and it is totally believable. 10/10 excellent |