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Comments from abroadsword
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-07-29 18:32:51 | How i became addickted._(0) | You didn't even spell the title right. Needs far more Paragraphs. Block text is hard to read. |
| 2015-08-06 17:01:40 | Training Desmond_(1) | Sorry, I must apologise. The Class 14 is in fact 650 horsepower. Peter wrote the original and asked me to post it. He will send part two for me to post when he can get hold of a "Volunteer" to see which bits pull off first. Feet or hands. Quite honestly I don't care what other people think as long as it sends a shiver down Pedo' s spines |
| 2015-08-05 09:53:48 | Trudy the Erotic Site Troll_(3) | I think people just give mine a negative rating because I wrote it. Very often the ratings creep up from an initial 50% to over 80 % weird. Pedos don't like stories which show them in a bad light like "Pedo Farm" or "Hanging Pedos from a Lamp Post by their bollocks." |
| 2015-09-09 10:26:07 | HER SISTER | It's a good story. I like it. It passes my test for punctuation which I can it be read out loud. Many "Beautifully Punctuated" stories cannot because the reader has no information as to who is speaking. I too get grief over punctuation. I read a lot of 1920 and 1950 English English and use 1950s English punctuation but punctuation has moved on. English "Full Stops" have become American "Periods." Don't let it get to you. The imagery is great, the storytelling excellent. Keep up the god work! |
| 2015-09-09 10:26:59 | HER SISTER | I meant Good work! |