| 2012-12-10 02:00:18 |
How I started fucking my daughter. Part 3
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Decent story. The actual intercourse could be more descriptive then " .. This went on for another 10 minutes..." You show promise as being a great writer but you need to improve your detailing. |
| 2012-12-10 06:22:30 |
Stepsister Seduction: Chapter 3: Seducing a new Victim
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Both after fucking each other |
| 2013-01-11 14:24:25 |
My Girlfriends Daughter_(1)
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Excellent I'm ready for part two and three and four |
| 2013-01-11 14:56:41 |
How to Care For a Golden Retriever
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Great story I see the possibility of more material with those two. |
| 2013-02-21 15:17:33 |
Amanda's Dad at the Gloryhole
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Oh fuck.... Now what |