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Comments from DSGIRLSD
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-04-29 21:39:19 | Cherry (chapter 8) | Wow. Great character development, a couple of very interesting twists ... to say noting of the fact that you had my panties soaked for the entire 8 sections. As you don't have any other series posted, I am wondering if this was your first attempt? If so bravo... a few misspelled and incorrect words used, but its so hard to edit your own stories - I should know. But overall, a really great effort. If you get a chance, read my story "French Lessons".... i, like you enjoy character development and back stories. By the way, you had one of the BEST ENDINGS I ever read! Chao, DSGIRLSD |
| 2019-03-05 07:25:02 | Being More Social - Chapters 1-5 | Wow. And I thought my stories had a lot of detail, character development, and back-stories. Really, REALLY, well done piece of literature with enough sex to keep it all titillating. I must explore you other stories. If you ever read mine, drop me a note to let me know what you think .... and how to be better DSGIRLSD |
| 2019-07-10 12:55:01 | Camping with my little Brother and Sister | Impossible to read. There IS such a thing as punctuation, ya know! |
| 2021-06-23 00:49:33 | Hot Tub Skinny Dipping | Wow. Very cool story. I can think of so many variables for this to go forward. Hoping for more. My stories tend to be long, with a lot of background. Hoping that there is a twist and we find out her mother knows/approves all her daughters games.....even though her daughter is so young! More background and chapter 2 soon? |