| 2012-03-12 20:17:06 |
Money is Power (conclusion)
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Thanks for all of the support. I don't know if I will write a sequel to this or not. I do plan to continue to write, and am working on another story right now. I may revisit Mindy so see what's happened in her life after Vegas. |
| 2012-03-12 20:32:57 |
Money is Power (conclusion)
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Thanks for all of the support. I don't know if I will write a sequel to this or not. I do plan to continue to write, and am working on another story right now. I may revisit Mindy so see what's happened in her life after Vegas. |
| 2012-03-17 23:12:24 |
Lust for my Best friends Sister_(1)
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For a first story, you shouldn't try to be so creative with the beginning. You need a better foundation and to lay out some plot. You need to build up to a climax and not start so close to it. |
| 2012-03-19 00:11:32 |
The Angry Young Man and the Douche-Nozzle’s girlfriend
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Positive Rating on both stories. I like you writing style. Good storyline and great sense of humor. You write this kind of story well. My constructive criticsm is to make it a bit longer and add more sex. For whatever that's worth |
| 2012-03-20 16:12:37 |
Verde County
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Thanks Lillitho4. I enjoyed your stories as well! |