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Comments from seltra
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-04-18 09:48:29 | What happens under the covers...stays under the covers... | Amazing story! I think it's fantastic the way you pace things. The buildup at the beginning of the story is what makes things so much hotter later on. I consider that the best way to write (therefore that's how I write). Excellent story of daddy-daughter love! |
| 2012-04-18 09:51:58 | Katie’s dress is too small | Jeez...cool it, guy. I agree that it should have had some backstory, but wasn't anywhere near as terrible as you made it sound. Ah, well. Haters gonna hate, right? This was really well written. Like I said, could have used some backstory, but excellent description and idea. |
| 2012-04-18 09:55:13 | Little Princess | Not bad; I liked it. Paragraphs were a little long, making my eyes bug out some on this site, but it was still very good writing. |
| 2012-04-18 09:56:38 | Monopoly Birthday | This was a fantastic story! Well done! So awesome that they keep him going long enough to have an experience with all three of them. Don't know if I could have done that. Totally hot and well written! |
| 2012-04-18 10:03:00 | Catching Emily | Loved the way he coerced her. This whole series was fantastic! You're a great writer and I'm looking forward to reading your other stories when I can. |