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Comments from seltra
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-09-10 10:06:05 | Sister -- Brother -- Lover | Not bad. Quite an interesting premise, though I don't know if I could hook up with a girl that's supposed to be a guy lol. I do like the ending. I can tell it's leading up to lots more! Well written. |
| 2012-09-28 10:54:51 | Teasing Little Brother Goes Too Far | Great story. Enjoyed the incest theme and every paragraph left me wanting to read the next to know what happens. I see you've tagged it as a true story, so tell us if it's 'the end'. What happened afterwards? Even if it was all that happened, this could certainly lead to some great fiction anyways. Could do with some editing for continuity's sake, but the story itself was great! Well done. |
| 2012-09-28 11:45:27 | Falling in love with Uncle josh | Awesome story, pixy! Nicely developed characters and background (which is something I think is essential for a strong story), and a smooth-flowing storyline to follow. Wonderful romance and well-played surprises. Hope you have some ideas for continuing this. There has GOT to be more. |
| 2012-10-17 09:47:50 | Alanna's Lust | Fantastic story. Written very well with very few errors. A little more background would have been nice, but that's personal preference. Love how he ended up with both the neighbour girl and his daughter. Any plans on continuing this one? The second comment is right, though; no contraception? Pretty risky... Anyways, great story, freakshow! Glad I'm not the only one around here with ideas like this. |
| 2013-01-11 09:43:32 | lily - chapter 1 | Decent story, sexwarrior. Could it use some editing and refining of writing skills? Sure, but practice makes perfect. Very good ideas and good description. Could use a little more background, but I found the storyline intriguing. Keep writing! ;) |