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Comments from seltra
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-04-18 10:18:22 | Unexpected pleasure | A few editing errors, but all in all, not too bad. Really liked it. Kept me interested and intrigued. Keep going! |
| 2012-04-18 10:20:02 | Son Helps His Mother Cope | Very enjoyable story. Loved the fact that she thought he was her husband; added some humour to it. Great explanation about his background, too. Made for a very compelling read. |
| 2012-04-24 15:02:39 | Sibling Surprise | Absolutely phenominal, Ghost Writer! Love the description and detail you put into things. Storyline flowed magnificently, aided superbly by the vivid writing. I don't think the story could be much hotter! Perfect ending -- to this chapter, anyways. Please let me know there are more ideas whirling around in your mind. Definitely on my list of favourites to stay! Easy 10/10 without even trying! |
| 2012-04-24 15:10:27 | Take me Daddy | A little short, but certainly worth reading. Intriguing storyline, but does need a little editing, though. |
| 2012-04-24 16:13:21 | The Best Christmas Ever | Spectacular again, curiousone! Great description. Sure, sex can be fun, but the romance and passion is how I agree (and try to perform) things should be worked up to. Well thought and well presented. To add to it, I like the way you add just a hint of profanity to liven things up. Less is more, I figure. An endless cascade of a three-word vocabulary can get very boring after a while. Excellent story crowned with pure passion. Well done! Solid 10/10. |