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Comments from farmerken
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2012-04-26 20:55:56 | Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 19: Angels Take another Angel Home | Sgt. J: I just wanted to once again say thank you for sharing your life stories with all of us readers. I really enjoy them, and look forward to each of your next/new chapters when they come out. You have been so lucky, to have experienced the loves that you have described to this point. Once again, thanks for sharing with us. |
| 2012-05-04 02:44:03 | Swinging in the Neighborhood chapter 20 Melissa Awaits | Sgt. J: I just wanted to once again tell you how much I have enjoyed reading your life story. I have to sympathize with you, in that it is always difficult when we realize that a child has grown up, and that somehow we must have missed part of it happening, even if we were right there. Also, I was wondering if you were going to mention Terry in your next/final chapter? You mentioned in Chapter 14 that she came back into your life again. I was just wondering when? I was sad to hear that your next Chapter will be your last one, but I understand. Where this has been your life story, there had to come a point where you brought either current or to the last major event in your life. I hope that you will continue writing, maybe about some of your acquaintances or friends, or maybe some fiction. I will watch to see if you post any more after the next Chapter. Keep up the good work, and thanks again for sharing with us. |
| 2014-05-06 06:03:02 | Frontier V | I think that Carl needs to be over all good. I would leave some darkness in him, but not much. Also, as Danielle progresses, I think that she should become more attached to Carl, Jackey, Stacy, and Cynthia, to the point that she becomes very protective of them as she falls in love with them. As Carl grows into his powers, she also has the girls gain some powers, so that they balance each other. Just my opinion, but you asked for suggesstions. Keep up the good work, this is shaping up to be a good series. farmerken |
| 2013-04-03 03:35:38 | Returning Chapter 03 | Just wanted to say that I have been enjoying your story (even though only 3 chapters are still on the site (and wish the others were still up)), and think that you are a very talented author. I have nothing but admiration for anyone that can create a story like you have. It transported me into another world, where I felt the characters as if they were me. I am glad that you were able to get a book deal. This site is a opportunity for authors to get recognition for their creative ideas. I wish that it was a stepping stone for more of them to get published. To all of the "Anonymous readers" that posted hate/negative/bitching comments to you for pulling the later chapters, all I can say is that they either did not read your posts in the comments, or they really don't care if you get published, and get the recognition that you deserve. Once again, thank you for the effort that you have put into the story. I look forward to reading anything else you may write in the future. |
| 2013-04-05 01:37:23 | The Boss's Daughter, Ch 1: The Beginning of the madness | A great story. I enjoyed it, and look forward to your next chapter. As a sugestion, re-read your story a couple of times before you post it. That will prevent mistakes like "... head off her chest so I was looking into those eyes. Her looked like someone had stolen the stars ..", probalby should have been "... head off her chest so I was looking into those eyes. Her's looked like someone had stolen the stars ..." Or "... large since of humor ...", should have been "... large sense of humor ..." Also,some times 'i" should have been "I". Some mistakes a spelling checker will catch, but it will not catch a grammatical or punctuation error. A lot of them could be caught with the extra re-reads. Like I said before, I liked your story, and look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!! |