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Comments from Dizzyworks673
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| 2012-06-14 12:01:27 | I just wanted to thank everyone for the feedback and the kind thoughts about my stories. I want to apologize ahead of time right now and say it might be a little while before the next chapters are ready, To tell the story right and to get to the ending I had to completely scrap the next chapter and start over. I'm now working on an AD chapter and a TSB chapter at the same time because they tie into each other as the story comes to its final chapters. There is still some way to go but the ending is coming. Thanks for your understanding and I will have it out as soon as I'm done typing it! | |
| 2012-06-16 00:53:28 | My virgin cousin | I see potential in your writing, but readers want more story. Don't feel you have to rush, tell the reader more about who the characters are and why they would be into each other. It would've been more interesting if they had more motivation or reason to have sex than she saw his erection. Let him find out she has a secret crush on him and he has to find a way to make it happen. Just some suggestions I hope to see you grow with your writing. Contact me if you ever want advise. Spacing will detour some readers just break it up a little and you'll get better comments. Hope this helped I would like to see you build on this story concept. Dizzy.......... |
| 2012-06-22 01:26:42 | I've asked before but could people not use my comments to try and hook up? That is what the forum is for. Sorry about the delay in my next chapter. I've had major family issues going on and haven't been able to write. I had to scrap two chapters and start over again and then I scrapped that too. Were getting close to the end and I need to tell it right. Thanks for your patience and I will have the next chapter when I can. |
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| 2012-06-26 01:32:13 | To the person below I'm the same way with the stories I follow so I understand. I've been busy with a relitive having open heart surgery and other family illnesses going on right now. I'm working on the final Ashley story and the next TSB chapter. Only a few chapters left. With all going on I've been having a hard time getting things right and have compleatly started my Ashley chapter over about 4 times. I will have the next chapters out when I can get my head right again. Thanks for waiting I hope to have more soon. | |
| 2012-06-27 03:57:36 | True Adventures In Babysitting (part 1) | Well done as far as the writing goes but 4 years old? Really? I usually don't like to critisize other writers but 4 years old is just wrong! |