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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-09-23 15:47:03 | A day with my cousins | When using multiple character viewpoints with rapid changes between them, it is probably best to use the third-person omniscient voice and simply identify whose POV is current at the moment. Good luck with your next story. |
| 2014-08-30 19:21:19 | Being More Social - Chapter 5 | I'm enjoying this story a lot and am glad that I found your logged pos vote on Ashley's story. If you want more specific comments, I would recommend also posting this in the forum as well. One positive aspect of posting there is that spam is easily removed. Another is that many of the regular authors are willing to offer detailed, constructive criticism. |
| 2014-08-30 17:40:56 | Being More Social - Chapter 1 | Found this through your comment on another story - so glad that you posted while logged into the site. Pos vote logged and new favorite added. I hope to see this story grow for a long time. |
| 2013-09-12 16:54:12 | A New Day, A New Us part 3 | RESEND DUE TO GETTING LOGGED OUT OF THE SYSTEM ! GRUMBLE Thanks for the new installment. It's fun reading your work. |
| 2013-09-13 08:48:44 | I found my sister stripping. | one of three to get rid of the dumbass creating the WASS |