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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-09-27 22:29:45 | A New Day, A New Us part 4 | wonderful tensioning of the story - I hope that you have the next chapter nearly finished so that you can publish it soon. |
| 2013-09-28 11:03:51 | The Judgment of Sgt. J. Chapter 10 Sailing into Hell | Powerful writing as always. May you and your loves find your peace. |
| 2013-10-01 20:54:20 | Magical Hearts | This was a nice chapter to read - I foresee some good reading in the future. Thank you for your submission. |
| 2013-10-01 22:09:45 | School holiday relevation | To the one making comments about the grammar, consider the fact that you are commenting on an Aussie story and see if that does not correct at least some of the grammar issues. This was an interesting story which was a pleasure to read. |
| 2013-10-07 18:27:47 | Magical Hearts chapter 4 | Logged in pos recorded - this is a wonderful little feel-good story and I really want to see what you can do with it. |