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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-10-28 23:14:44 | Magical Hearts | posting to get the WASS comments off the screen |
| 2013-10-28 23:15:21 | Magical Hearts | Final post to get the Wide Ass Scree Syndrome post off the page |
| 2013-11-12 22:55:23 | Parental guidance_(0) | There are some spelling errors but IMO, those are simple typos instead of unfamiliarity with the language. The story was good reading, overall, but cut off too soon; there is no true resolution to the story itself. |
| 2014-05-22 22:20:53 | Boy in the grass 60 | That ending is gonna piss people off worse than the courthouse steps back near the beginning of the story. I also did not like the way that the story was told from surveillance instead of first person but if the end of the chapter is a proper indication, then it was needed. I just hope that there is justification in the next chapter or two for this ending. |
| 2013-11-19 04:49:04 | The day I get a step brother. Part 1_(0) | I have some tips for you 1 - do not post a long string of characters with no spaces - the system does not know what to do with them and so you end up[ with Wide Ass Screen Syndrome (WASS) and the reader has to scroll from side to side. This scrolling makes it very hard to read on a screen. 2 - posting 6 times will not make your story any more likely to be read |