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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-11-26 03:56:38 | The Ticket V | ya gotta quit leaving us hanging off a cliff. get to a logical stopping point (where most other writers would put a chapter end) and THEN stop writing. most of your readers are reading because they want to see the story not because of the cliffhangers |
| 2013-11-26 04:32:32 | Wandering-Final | interesting story - a little short for an epic, however. LOL I enjoy reading your work; keep it up. |
| 2013-12-02 01:29:32 | Stranded_(0) | A very good story with a good setup for a continuation but which is COMPLETE in itself. |
| 2013-12-02 08:15:16 | My Irish Virgin Part 1 | This was a very good beginning to what promises to be a very good tale. |
| 2013-12-03 04:01:40 | A girl and her tentacle monster 3 | posting to get rid of the pesky WASS posts |