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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-09-23 15:38:30 | A Past new Beginning (The Mission 2) | How many series are you going to work at one time? Oh, well. If you do as well with this story as you have done with the others then I think I can suffer with them. |
| 2014-06-07 12:35:48 | Beautiful Niece Kaylee Ch.10 | neg voter is doing so anonymously - gotta wonder if this is the same jerk who is stalking Magusfang Your writing is very enjoyable to read; here's hoping to be able to continue reading it. |
| 2014-04-28 05:16:48 | Boy in the grass 22 | I am re-reading this and found a problem with the timing. The original court date was Thursday and the family recuperated on Friday. The call from court saying that the "divorce proceedings would resume the following afternoon" would indicate that the courts were open on Saturday. I hate to be pedantic, but that won't happen. |
| 2014-04-17 23:22:07 | Boy in the grass 41 | I cannot understand why there would be such a backlash over including Becca in the mix. Besides, it is YOUR story and I think that you are doing a wonderful job of telling it. I continue to wait for the next installment … |
| 2014-10-17 06:21:30 | A Good Man 9 | Peppers, you ended it. LOL It was a good read. I would suggest that you go back through the chapters and verify that everything is as you want and then combine all chapters into one publication. |