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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-07-11 11:45:34 | Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 28 The Daughter War Begins | The only thing that I dislike about your chapters is the way that you end them on a cliff. I would much rather see the chapters begin with something beginning to happen than begin with something having already happened. |
| 2012-07-16 03:41:23 | The Librarian and the Bartender | WONDERFUL story; GREAT character development. More; please write more. |
| 2014-05-15 11:58:36 | Boy in the grass 57 | You would think that the person giving negative votes would realize that too many other people are willing to give this story positives. This was definitely a good feel-good chapter and I like the motorcycle concept. I also like the way that Max kept his promise to Carol. The only problem is that it creates a permanent drain on medical/support resources. |
| 2014-08-11 16:22:41 | If you win? - part 1 | The original version has apparently been removed - possibly due to age restrictions. |
| 2012-07-25 13:34:39 | Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 29 Daddies Revenge | This story is what it is - with, or without any element. The power of your story would have been cheapened by the inclusion of diluting elements. I am only sorry to hear you state that you are nearing the end of your story. I hope to see more of your writing in the future. |