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Comments from truebutchanged
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-01-28 00:12:04 | Kara the slut | eh. not the best. very unbelievable |
| 2013-11-25 13:08:40 | Jessica_(2) | paragraphs and tags would make your readers MUCH happier... |
| 2013-11-26 11:37:01 | Rape of Lara | eh. it was a good try for sure. the random "quotes" when no one was speaking was annoying. the dialog between the two wasn't very great... many other punctuation and spelling errors i like the concept of the story, but all in all, needs to be improved. thumbs down on this one |
| 2013-11-26 11:44:30 | It Started Out Consensual | way too short of a sex scene... you had such detail about the characters and what was happening until you started having sex, then it was simply quick and factual. Id love for you to write one from the boy's point of view, maybe with a lot more detail of the actual event, not to mention what happened afterwards |
| 2013-11-26 11:44:35 | It Started Out Consensual | way too short of a sex scene... you had such detail about the characters and what was happening until you started having sex, then it was simply quick and factual. Id love for you to write one from the boy's point of view, maybe with a lot more detail of the actual event, not to mention what happened afterwards |