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Comments from truebutchanged
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2014-09-15 07:07:31 | Please Don't Rape Me | you cut your reading list so much by doing it in the second person towards a girl. why dont you try a third person or first person approach? a more diverse group would be able to get into it. Also needs more length, and would be much easier to read if you spaced between paragraphs |
2013-07-05 12:56:29 | Megyn Kelley - Surprise Sex | had potential... but ill pass |
2013-07-05 13:01:47 | Pool Girls Part 1 | nicely done! great story |
2013-07-07 00:15:54 | Chronicles of Suzy Lee Part 1 | spelling and writing was awful. and a 6'7 asian chick? lol..... very unrealistic. very horrible story in general. thumbs way down |
2013-07-07 00:27:05 | Kelsey - "No Dad. STOP" | the writing really needed improvement, but the story itself was great! no vote i guess. im torn |