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Comments from h0Ax8omb3r
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-05-30 20:49:43 | Cumming of Age - 1. Blowing off steam | A great story, I can see this one having a great following if you carried it on. Just a suggestion but maybe add a younger sister in at some point having her catch them in the act getting mad about it but finaly *cumming* around and joining in the fun. |
| 2015-05-30 20:55:24 | A Boy and his Genie - Chapter 09 | It was a shame this one was so short but i can be happy knowing that it will continue to impress, even though tis one was a relitivley short offering it still brought a lot to the table in terms of plot development. I myself find it difficult to give a decent plot to my storys and as such have not written for a long time but yours are giving me that feeling of needing to write again so thank you. Please feel free to check out my Story My Sisters 13th Birthday Party |
| 2015-07-22 01:42:03 | Divine Succession - Chapter 09 | I really enjoyed this chapter, I like how you had David stand up to his wife when she was trying to be authorotive and also that he is writing some of the things he has done. May I suggest that you bring back the planet that he damned in a further chapter and possibly have him do some things there up to you what he does maybe change there belief system to one he agrees with and then have some other things go wrong but not so far that he completely flips again maybe just Damn a few people. Great work and keep it up don't worry so much about getting chapters out so fast we would rather it be a great story than have it feel like you just pushed it out. Well I would anyway h0Ax8omb3r |
| 2015-06-06 13:47:50 | A Boy and his Genie - Chapter 10 | Yet again another great chapter to your amazing story. Just one little thing I think may of worked better is when the wished away everything alex had wished for instead of killing all the mindless girls they could of given them completely new lives again just a thought but I tthink it would have fitted better with matt and sophies characters |
| 2015-06-11 12:50:03 | A Boy and his Genie - Chapter 11 | Yet another great chapter in a thrilling story |