| 2015-06-15 02:32:59 |
A Boy and his Genie - Chapter 13
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I Can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter, and i agree with Anon i hope you use the 4 main characters in a follow up story in college or such if the final chapter of this series would allow it that is you never know where a story will lead untill you get their. |
| 2015-07-05 12:27:37 |
Divine Succession - Chapter 01
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Wow another Epic story from a great writer, kudos Drago |
| 2015-07-05 13:16:23 |
Divine Succession - Chapter 02
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dammit i want to watch Bruce Almighty now |
| 2015-07-07 09:35:09 |
Divine Succession - Chapter 05
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What a little twist i love it, can not wait to see where this leads |
| 2015-07-14 13:46:23 |
Divine Succession - Chapter 07
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Although i do love this story as i did with a boy and his genie i agree with some of the other comentors this story seemed to jump to dark very quickly it would have been a little better if in the scene where he destroys the planet, david instead of just destroying it listens to the pleas of the girls he just saved and remembers that there are other innocents on the planet and stops what he is doing wracked with guilt, then he offers the people a chance for redemption and take it from there. I am not saying dont go down the dark path with him just make it a little more of a gradual flow instead of an instant explosion. just my opinion but something for you to think about for your future chapters. |