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Comments from djb8247
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-12-08 02:49:40 | Morning Bells (Part Two) | what about part 1, where is it? |
| 2014-06-30 00:39:28 | Of Monsters & Men: Mermaid chronicles | For someone your age , to write such a lovely story, absolutely a budding master writer, congratulations for a job WELL DONE, hoping for much more from you... |
| 2014-12-19 21:01:51 | Magical Hearts | This story needs quite a few things beginning with, 1, a good English teacher, 2, a spell checker, 3, an editor, 4, a complete rewrite of the entire series, 5, a very patient proof reader. SHOULD NOT HAVE BEEN PUBLISHED, AS IT IS ALMOST UNREADABLE, so many mistakes, a first year student could write and spell better than this.... |
| 2014-12-19 21:14:42 | How bad could it be anyway? corrected | if this is the corrected version I hate to think what the original is like. |
| 2014-07-09 01:43:37 | One Rainy Evening Part 1 | I think I will read the rest of the story first before I make a valid comment..... |