| 2012-10-14 14:04:04 |
Twisted Brotherly Love chapter 1 - 3
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most stupid story i have read so far,all the punishment to a child that age would have killed her in approx 6 hours,you should do some good research before even thinking about another story. |
| 2012-10-17 15:04:26 |
Jesse's Mother-In-Law
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sounds more like a sub queen than a straight guy |
| 2012-10-19 17:40:08 |
Jeanie's Big Boy
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whats with the 渵 all the time?,ruins the story and makes it nonsensicle |
| 2012-10-23 23:41:42 |
My days in Thailand part 5: A Thia's storyy
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all chapters need more fleshing out to make them far more interesting |
| 2012-11-03 16:46:10 |
Sweet Little Sister
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a good story, looking forward to the next part, |