| 2014-04-13 01:03:55 |
POKER--PART 4
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read the whole series in one session, very interesting and very very enjoyable... |
| 2014-12-22 20:04:51 |
Adventures with Gwen: Chapter 1 - Thursday night
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don't you just hate stories written in this format? yuk, who wants to read a script for a play? unless your a producer.... |
| 2015-09-01 05:30:14 |
Sara's Protective Dad part 2
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Every thing explained, BUT, a complete mess up in the writing of it, half the time translating the bloody mistakes and trying to work out what you are trying to say, DEFINATELY NOT your best work, whole story should be wiped and rewritten CORRECTLY.. giving up on the rest of it.... |
| 2015-08-29 03:23:09 |
Moden Mage Chapter 20
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It now seems (to me at least) that you have definitely lost the plot, too much going on, and now it seems to be just sheer unadulterated, PURE RUBBISH. what a shame, I was enjoying this up to the last 3 chapters... |
| 2015-08-15 02:12:51 |
Back from the future
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I tried to read this before and gave up on it. Doing the same this time as well, bloody rubbish. |