| 2013-02-22 23:32:53 |
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To the one who commented that my using the name Dick Wiener was weak, I have to shake my head at what some readers feel is poor writing. FYI, I wrote this story over 10 years ago and no reader in the past even noticed that name. The fact is that I myself never noticed the 'humor' in the name. I chose it because it just came to mind as it was the name of one of my former co-workers. And strangely, not once in the 10 years I worked with the guy did I ever hear any other co-worker comment. If choosing such a name deserves a negative mark, it might be time for me to consider stopping posting. |
| 2013-02-28 11:14:34 |
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Very nice first effort, looking forward to more or this story. It would be a shame if Daddy didn't give his princess all that she wanted. BTW, grammar was quite good; it showed that you made a real effort. Regards, The Purvv |
| 2013-03-11 11:39:44 |
Who Let the Dog Out? Woof, Woof!
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It's nice to see that all who have commented so far, seemed to have enjoyed the story. Sadly, it looks as if it might get taken down. I'm not sure why, but after I posted this as Doctor Zoos, an email from the site advised that the registration was rejected (no explanation). I now see that although the story itself still has Doctor Zooz, the main page is listing the author as unknow. I've responded to them asking if they can at least switch the story to my regular story page and I'm waiting to hear back. |
| 2013-03-19 07:12:43 |
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Zondar. Although you didn't intend it, if the rating results are a legitimate indication, I'm quite surprised that when you only allowed signed in members, there was a much lower rate of positive (or a much high rate of negative) votes. I say surprised because I would have thought those voters would have included established authors who should have only considered if the story was constructed well. We all know the work involved to write, edit, etc. and if any should cut you the greatest slack, it should be from fellow writers. BTW, you don't need any slack cut, your writing is GREAT. |
| 2013-03-19 10:26:23 |
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Well done yourself, anonymous. I was actually thinking of writing a story titled 'Zuzu's Petals' :) May still do it yet, who knows? |