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Comments from Auora
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-03-19 18:44:01 | Liked this chapter but don't like the direction its headed with John becoming "chef" maybe, that's just me though | |
| 2013-03-21 16:10:30 | I liked it but I wished Grace was there | |
| 2013-03-25 18:23:30 | What End ! No way I'm loving this story I can't wait to see what ends up happinging | |
| 2013-03-28 08:09:38 | Twin Japanese Nieces Pt18_(0) | * Whoops wasn't logged in This was amazing and sounds like the best birthday. I'm glad and thank you for wanting to continue and can't wait to see what happens with your family Auora |
| 2013-03-29 23:54:10 | Okay let me just say first and for most I love your story, I've been following since the begging but this chapter was a little confusing. Grace's part I understood but at certain parts it was confusing, didnt make sense. It could be editing I'm not sure and I'm not trying to be picky at all it was just hard to follow. The once you switched back it got kind of awkward. Overall it was good and I can't wait to read more. Also I'm sorrry if I'm sounding harsh I'm not trying to just letting you know what I saw/read. Auora |