| 2014-08-07 03:41:16 |
secret at every corner chp 1
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well what you're doing is a start but what I really think you need to focus on is more definition as to who's talking what they're talking about your descriptions are good but you need to go into more depth I'm having trouble seeing what you're writing |
| 2014-02-01 03:26:44 |
A New Day, A New Us part 11
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Okay so after going through 8 pages of bullshit advertisments for shit NOBODY is going to fall for as legitimate option in their lives i finally found a comment with (amazingly enough a question). I am currently working out details for the story. I'd like people to ping the administrators on here to help stop the advertisements or at least let me remove them. |
| 2014-02-03 05:00:59 |
A New Day, A New Us part 11
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I have been advised to not allow anonymous comments anymore due to the bulk of bad advertising going on with 'anonymous readers'. I'm not keen to do it considering the reason they're advertising is because my readers are voting my work with their favor and even though I'm asking a lot I'd like for people to try to report some of these posts. Series 4 is a in progress and hopefully will be posted soon. |
| 2014-09-27 19:07:14 |
Path to Our Future part 8
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I'm glad people are liking it and I understand that many don't like my use of cliffhangers. I get that I'm doing it alot but I have to use them as bookends, kind of a goal location in writing for where to stop the chapter. Otherwise i'd be writing the whole thing and only put out a story every couple months and my brain isn't wired that way. On a sad note some work problems have reared their ugly head and it might delay any chance of series 6 happening in the near future after i finish series 5, now i will finish five but loss of income meets loss of internet and you see the pattern. I'm hopeful but uncertain, anyhow I am still writing now and will endeavor to finish my last few chapters. |
| 2014-09-20 08:01:27 |
Path to Our Future part 7
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I apologize for the late posting on Friday night PST. I was working more than normal and it took from my writing. Enjoy and comment with feedback or write me on my profile if able. |