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Comments from Cunnilique
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-10-25 01:24:19 | Just to Get By V | Fantastic writing. Very evocative and visual. Interesting use of present tense, creating a somewhat cinematic style of storytelling. |
| 2013-11-15 12:39:08 | The POP-Jammer | If you liked this story, please rate and comment. Some of the things I write have more stories/chapters to tell but feedback helps me determine if it's worth it. Should I continue with the story? Would you read a second or third chapter? If you didn't like it, tell me why. What's missing or wrong with it? Thanks for contributing. |
| 2014-01-06 21:33:49 | I Like to Watch Boys Masturbate | Excellent story. Great pacing and really great to get a story like this from a woman's perspective. There is so much obfuscation around female sexuality. The general assumption is that a woman would "never want to watch" or that the male is always the "pervert" and the woman is always the object of desire. It's really great to see those gender roles flipped. |
| 2015-05-24 05:17:18 | Mandy and Me: Part 1 | I agree with other commenters, 2nd person perspective rarly ever works an generally makes the reader hate you. This story would be many times better written as first or third person. |
| 2015-11-21 13:37:21 | All because of my suisters panties | Pretty good except that Allison turned into Autumn in the middle and the paragraph structure is a bit unrefined. Decent effort though. |