| 2016-04-12 17:44:56 | 
			
				
					HOMELESS--Part 2				
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			A wonderful, well written tale. I will await the next chapter. THANK YOU  !!!! | 
		
			
			| 2016-04-12 18:19:48 | 
			
				
					Hypnotizing Whitney_(1)				
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			What a wonderful, sexy story. More please  !!! THANK YOU !!! | 
		
			
			| 2016-04-14 15:17:33 | 
			
				
					HOMELESS--Part 3				
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			As I have said before you are a very talented writer and I love this story. Please continue on forever.  THANK YOU  !!!! | 
		
			
			| 2017-01-10 17:30:09 | 
			
				
					JUST AN OLD-FASHIONED GIRL--Part 4 of 6				
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			Your still # 1 . Don't stop this tale, let it go on forever.  Thank you!! | 
		
			
			| 2016-04-27 18:28:09 | 
			
				
					New In Town_(1)				
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			You might make it as a writer (?) but before you do you must have your stories read by a Proof Reader because this one is a mess. Your ending is too short, actually not an ending just a falling off a cliff. Don't give up and you can make it !! |