| 2016-01-17 18:15:29 |
Black Cock Factory 1: Danielle
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No matter what I were to tell you , you would never belive how true this story actually is. It go's on in seven large cities in the U.S. Not one female that has been requited to this life has any desire to leave. They do receive a bank account and a dollar amount is deposited weekly for them when they chose to leave. "Belive it on not" |
| 2016-01-22 16:54:04 |
The Caretaker. Part 2_(1)
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I have now read both chapters and must say I enjoyed this well written story very much. Please continue on with many more chapters. Thank you !!! |
| 2016-01-22 16:28:22 |
The Caretaker. Part 1_(1)
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Very good, looking forward to MANY more chapters. Thank you !! |
| 2016-01-23 16:56:20 |
Ethan's Ski Trip With Russ Pt. 1: Warm-Up Taboo Before The Trip._(1)
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An interesting story BUT the Boo-Boo's were way too many. Since you don't seem to be able to correct them I would suggest a Professional Proof Reader. They will make a point of you being a writer or a waste. |
| 2016-01-31 18:03:17 |
Holiday Break
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Great story and well written. I'll give it a 9 out of 10 only because of a few boo-boos from not Proof Reading before putting it here. Well done, thank you !!! |