| 2015-11-28 18:26:47 |
Allie & Sam: the beginning
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Great story and very well written, please continue on, actually don't ever stop. This story could go many directions and I hope it does. THANK YOU !!!!! |
| 2015-11-28 19:29:54 |
Cloe and Sam
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Such cry-babies, a very enjoyable tale. Thank You !!!!! |
| 2015-11-29 19:27:07 |
The Old Man & the Beach--Part 1
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I'm back for the second reading and I love it more than ever. Your a fine story teller. Thanks again. |
| 2015-11-29 21:33:46 |
The Old Man and the Beach--Part 3
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I have now finished all three chapters and have loved all of the written words although Max having to go to the Rainbow Bridge had me in tears. Thank you for writing this story !! |
| 2015-12-12 18:07:30 |
My first quicke!_(1)
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You need to study several of the 93% rated stories to see how they are written and put into print. ALSO read anything twice before sending it to XNXX. !! |