| 2016-09-15 18:19:13 |
Debauchery: The Invitation
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Your writing is beautiful ' the most professional I have read in some time. This story brought me back in time to my younger days (I'm 82) when I experienced an invitation to an estate built in the 1850's. It served the same purpose and was a wonderful experience in the three times I was there. I do hope you continue this story. Thank you !!!! |
| 2016-12-27 15:51:31 |
THE WAGES OF SIN--Part 2
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The writing and story line are perfect, please don't ruin what can be a perfect ending !!! Thank You !!! |
| 2016-06-25 18:54:36 |
Working at a Resort 10- The Massage
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That was beautiful, very well written. I was waiting for his cock to enter her ass, maybe next time. Thank you !!! |
| 2016-06-25 19:18:58 |
OLD FRIENDS_(2)
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Great story and fine writing, BUT poor ending. Boyfriend should have been kicked out and these two should have lived happily ever after. Thank you !!!! |
| 2016-06-26 18:52:41 |
THE FOUNTAIN OF YOUTH_(0)
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I have been reading many stories on here and I don't understand how you do it but you have a way of drawing a reader into the story. This was a beautiful, wonderful and perfect story and if there is an afterlife I hope my wife Sonja and I will be together again as this couple was. Thank you for writing this. !! |