| 2013-06-27 17:56:26 |
The first incest experience with my mother - all 4 chapters compiled into 1 [as requested]
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Absolutely great! That was HOT! Please submit more in the same venue! After (Mrs) KinkyBelle, you are definitely my next favorite! I really look forward to more submissions! Thanks. |
| 2013-06-28 23:01:27 |
No Touching
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Very good story. I agree with countrycadillac that the story thread could really get very interesting. To me, there is not much that is more erotic than mutual masturbation with someone you have fantasized over, but can't touch! I just hope this doesn't screw up the relationships! Great job and I look forward to more of this story! Thanks! |
| 2013-06-29 12:50:11 |
the affairs
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Great batch. Thanks. |
| 2013-07-30 20:35:43 |
My Sister and I for the first time_(0)
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Pretty good story. Unfortunately, as others have commented, using incorrect words (found for fond, Mussels for muscles, and others) is a sign of poor English skills. Before posting to the whole world, PLEASE read your story slowly, and aloud. In this manner, you will find most errors. Assuming your primary purpose in submitting stories is providing entertainment for others. Don't spoil it with improper English and typos. My comments are intended to be constructive criticism. You have immeasurable more writing skills than I. Keep improving! |
| 2013-08-23 09:51:52 |
My naughty neighbor
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Very good story! You command of the English language is astounding and better than most American High School graduates due to the Obama administration's dumbing down of America's children. As an American, I find your English very easy to read. There are some sentences that seem slightly off, but still unbelievably good. Thank you for your efforts and continue with your writing in English. Be safe! |