| 2016-03-03 20:45:33 |
my best freind talked me into fucking my son
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It is unbelievable that someone could write so poorly! The concept was very good. However, one big block of text for the complete story is stupid! Second, there were about a dozen (or more) misspellings in a one-page story! Third, anyone who does not know the difference between 'there', 'they're' and 'their' or 'to' and 'too' can't be more than 5 years old. The English was abysmal, there were no quote marks in conversations, and the conversations were stilted and missing key words. Pathetic excuse for a writer or 'cut & pastor'. What's more sad is the person that wrote and submitted this is more than likely very proud. Pride, surely misplaced. |
| 2016-03-03 20:50:40 |
me and my son
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It appears that this writer is an absolute idiot. Garbage! |
| 2016-11-01 00:13:40 |
Tender Trap
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Well written, well edited, and well thought out! Very enjoyable and sensual story. Thanks for sharing! |
| 2016-05-17 11:28:51 |
A Visit from Beth
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Very well written story! As far as I could see, the editing was outstanding. I wish just half of the stories were edited so well. You wrote a very erotic story without inserting stupid, unbelievable crap. If you haven't already, you should consider a full length story with as much love as you have put into this one. Thanks for this one! |