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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-05-26 00:55:11 | Changing Pt. 3 | I wonder if John will accept his lover once she's fully turned into a woman. He might tire of her and resort to finding another male lover. All this could probably make the biggest change to happen to him by making him permanently gay. :) |
| 2015-05-28 09:25:57 | A Boy and his Genie - Chapter 08 | Anonymous readerReport 2015-05-26 11:12:11 Don't know why anonymous shows up I'm BludKnyght. You have to be logged in before writing a comment, for you nick to appear, Make sure that above the comment box and below Summit a comment, this appears : You are logged in as BludKnyght |
| 2015-06-05 20:30:14 | My wife and her lover | Only read 5 paragraphs so far. I suggest you proofread you text and re-post a reviewed version. This story could be good if it was well written. Get some help, ask a friend to proofread it for you. I'll pursue a little longer, but I can't promise to put myself through the strain of mentally correcting as I read along. |
| 2015-06-05 20:29:32 | Mystery sex toy pt3 | I don't see why we should comment on these stories, since the author doesn't seem to read them. Check is latest story posted today. Same type of horrible writing. I'm thinking this guy is doing it on purpose. |
| 2015-06-05 20:22:09 | My wife and her lover | I gave up. Going the operate direction??? (Or going the opposite direction?) That is just one example beside the lack of punctuation, which account for funny phrase construction. Review, review, proofread, get it proofread by a friend, perfect your English writing, get a course or something. Right now this is unreadable. |