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| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2015-06-07 05:21:14 | Bevy - A Professor/Student fantasy | Anonymous readerReport 2015-06-07 00:17:07 This was really good and I liked the ending. The reader below should be more concerned about his own mistake of double posting trivial b/s that most of us don't give a flying fuck about. Such aggressiveness, my Lord. And I thought I was making a constructive comment. As far as the double posting is concerned, it was through no fault of mine. The system decided to sent it twice, for some reason. I just hope it never happens to you. I mean could you even live with yourself if it ever did? :) |
| 2021-02-13 15:05:56 | Janice Goodall mind controlled day 3 | ùi quit trying to read this. Coudn't concentrate on the stacked up paragraphs. |
| 2021-01-10 23:43:03 | Malpractice Chapter 6: Foundations of a Harem | Suppose you're a part-time English tutor. I suggest that you proofread your stories before publishing them. Grammarly could be a great help; even the trial sub***********ion can help tremendously. I detected so many orthographic mistakes. Example: “No, it's... it's just your thumb. It feel great. Master...” Grammarly easily detects "feel" and offers this correction: “No, it's... it's just your thumb. It feels great. Master...” Sometimes it's good to have someone proofread one more time. When we write and proofread our own text, we can easily miss such minor errors. I suggest you find someone that would be glad to help. Your writing is extra-ordinarily good. These mistakes break the flow and force a reader to stop and read over to make sure he/she got it right. Some readers don't care, but a good proofreader can help make your work more professional. Congratulation on this series. I really enjoyed your development. |
| 2021-01-17 02:40:59 | The Harem Pt.2 | Listen to Hellcat41979. It is very annoying, and it distracts the readers, losing the story's flow, having to re-read lines all the time. |
| 2021-01-17 05:18:45 | The Harem Pt.5 | Just a little example of what I mean about proofreading: It felt like hours until we finally let go of each other and she was able to notice her surroundings again. Immediately, her face turned from deep (read) red to completely white and (here) her eyes grew big as she saw my harem watching us and making out with each other. “Marc, why... what... WTF? Why are these naked women watching us and masturbating to it?!?!” |