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Comments from Krot0Q
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-05-30 12:24:35 | Abduction on my way home | I am not usually a fan of alian stories. But yours as got me hooked. Very well written, humorous description of situations is very entertaining. Keep it up. Like the others, I encourage you to pursue with more chapters. There's a lot of potential to develop. Kudo! |
| 2015-06-02 09:33:30 | A Pilot and his Princess | I read the intro and thought the sex was at the end of the story and then I realized my mistake, when I saw the sex at the end of the chapter. And then I read a lot of : And then. And then i was aware that this meant the previous action was over, and then a new action was in progress. It was hilarious to read so many: and then, it kinda broke the rhythm and then I just skipped over that portion of the story and then I decided to make a constructive comment by suggesting to keep the description of action running smoothly, by eliminating the repetitive: and then's. |
| 2015-06-03 01:52:32 | Mom deceived by milkman | After three lines I give up. Like someone said: "Go back to school". |
| 2015-06-05 03:48:34 | A Boy and his Genie - Chapter 10 | Your proofreading actually is noticeable. I'm glad to see you've got your plot firmly defined in your head. Can't wait to read till the end. Good work. PS. Yes I'm a registered user actually writing a comment. :) |
| 2015-06-06 18:29:01 | Bevy - A Professor/Student fantasy | Nice, different from the usual in a good way. I certainly hope there'll be more chapters. I only detected a few minor mistakes, that you probably missed while proofreading, nothing to worry about. Don't we all re-read too fast sometimes? |