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Comments from icefrodo
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-08-03 21:06:30 | In Too Deep | The main character is empty and her sister comes across as an absolutely crazy and heartless bitch. Also the way this is it's basically *just* sex and no emotion, but... I'm sure that gets a lot of people off. Just not my preference. Despite all that I've upvoted this story, because the language is great and there are little to no grammatic errors. It's a good text, just not my cup of tea. Also, I had to laugh at ''Jacob Cullen''. |
| 2015-07-31 16:37:16 | Young Passion at Swim Practice Camp | Thanks for pointing that out, Mr. Anonymous reader! Indeed that is an error on my part... I still have much to learn when it comes to the English language! |
| 2015-07-30 10:22:24 | Princesses & Monsters | You would pronounce them Ah-lii-ley Lo-reh-ley =) |
| 2015-09-22 10:36:47 | Cousin Josh_(6) | Yeah, it's been posted before, but it got deleted due to ''underage characters'' :( |
| 2016-05-11 15:57:54 | Cousin Josh_(6) | The reason I use alternating perspective in some stories (not this one though) is because I like trying picture what the other person feels and thinks. There's more to be felt that way: 2 persons feel more than just one. |