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Comments from stillers7
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-09-09 06:55:30 | Being More Social - Chapter 7 | As always, the story is great and the writing is so crisp. I'm writing my story, I think I've set a scene well, then I read this tonight and think "Oh shit, I am not nearly this good" The scene on Nicole's parent's bed was classic |
| 2014-11-20 23:35:34 | Bruce and Selena | It's not all mine, as it's adapted from what has been shown on screen. For those parts that help set the scene, I have borrowed the dialogue, but then had to rebuild all the visual aspects into text - novelizing it. At some point I diverged into my own original story, but I had to do it in a way that was consistent with the existing story and characters, so that if my parts where shown on screen nobody would be saying "WTH did that come from?" Keeping that in mind, I avoided crude language in both my narration and dialogue, preserving a smooth transition from their story to mine. |
| 2014-08-29 03:45:09 | Being More Social - Chapter 5 | Nicole is a very interesting character, quite complex. Although Adam is the narrator, and it's presumably his story, Nicole is becoming the star, as told through Adam's eyes. |
| 2014-09-10 20:57:58 | Being More Social - Chapter 7 | As I've mentioned here before, Adam has no experience with relationships and is figuring out how to do this as he goes. Nicole, on the other hand, is experienced, but an emotional mess, afraid to commit. Now that she's been so close to Adam for so long, she letting down her shields and starting to accept what they already have. Meanwhile, Nicole likes Phil enough as a friend, but she's been toying with him. She uses his attraction towards her in order to manipulate him to her benefit. Phil likely caught her in an unguarded moment, and before Nicole could say no it happened and now she can NOT say that she didn't like it. All this time Nicole avoided expressing an attachment to anyone, and just as she does Phil happens and again she's lost control of her emotions. |
| 2014-12-02 07:16:49 | All Good Things pt.2 | to clarify what I meant - it's already been written that Kaylee gave Josh the BJ, can't change that. What you can do now is have both characters reflect on what happened, and help it shape what we know of their personalities. |