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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-01-27 05:12:08 | man and gator | Funny ( Your comment is too short ) yet Nice was passed. |
| 2015-01-28 04:17:15 | Bedding the Babysitter Ch 02 | “She did jot even notice me.” You intended the word not notice. I only spotted a few typos. As so many have advised, ask a friend to Proof Read before posting. When you become famous recall sometimes those who helped you. |
| 2015-01-30 22:33:40 | Avery | Thank you Mike for the sweet love story. Since we all are children of Adam & Eve we are all " related" to each other. Avery, in the story, was conceived when Noreen was in love with the hero. Avery is an thus an exceptional person. Sadly, the reverse is true. |
| 2015-01-29 00:59:54 | The Neighbour's Daughter | " A few minutes later Bethany returned, joining him in bed. She curled up close to him. Resting her head on his chest. As they both calmed down they simply drifted off to sleep in each others arms. " Thank you Writer a very lovely conclusion. You posted this story only 3 hours ago. Thus I will not whine for Part 2 , Well done. |
| 2015-02-03 22:29:44 | Helping Her Rebound | Please BannaAnn reformat your story. It is difficult to follow without the conventional 2 empty spaces between paragraphs. Many of the writer's who post on this blog use conventional formatting. I will check out the other blog you posted. |