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Comments from Proofreader
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-05-02 09:45:29 | How I Met Her - Revised (corrected spacing) | It looks like you're in the middle of a few story lines, this and Full Circle. I am trying to be patient, I know it takes time to do a proper job, but 2011 is a long time, I hope you're OK and just on hiatus. Screw the trolls. |
| 2016-05-27 13:31:52 | Body of a Man, Mind of Machine - Chapter Five_(1) | I can't tell why people rate this down, don't they have a sense of adventure? Sex is only one kind of adventure and they all are good. |
| 2017-03-13 12:51:40 | SOVEREIGNTY 2 | I love it when people try to criticize your spelling and grammar, and can't even get a short paragraph out without far more errors, like Anonymous 2016-01-01. I have had no problem understanding everything you have written. The grammar Nazis should get to work on Mark Twain or Emily Dickinson, that will provide them a lifetime of entertainment and they can get off your back. -Proofreader |
| 2017-03-04 02:24:00 | The Worst Day Ever? | Neener neener, I logged in just to bring the rating above 90%. I loved the History questions. To the big-talking critics, no you wouldn't have pulled a knife, and no you wouldn't have told your parents to fuck off, if you didn't want to get your ass beat or thrown in jail. Fourteen-year-olds just don't have many options. |
| 2017-02-24 10:08:43 | Lost Empire 31 | OK, I can't resist, I love this series but NCO can attest, "A bitching troop is a happy troop" so I have a small bitch. Pars, you have written so many stories and when we link to your name they seem to display in random order. Finding the next episode is like "Where's Waldo?" It's worth it, but is there some easy way your list can be sorted by title? This is the first of your stories I've read but it won't be the last. -Proofreader |