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Comments from Proofreader
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-02-24 11:13:00 | Lost Empire 32 | Ha ha, I have my suspicions too. There were clues left. But leave it to Pars to leave deceptive clues and produce a big plot twist at the end. Like Conan Doyle loved to do. -Proofreader |
| 2017-02-25 08:33:16 | Lost Empire 39 | Nice work, as always. This series is as fun as the adventure serials they played every week at matinees, long ago. Now that I'm done binge reading I have to be patient. Looking forward to the next exciting chapter. |
| 2017-03-13 13:29:10 | SOVEREIGNTY 3 | Ditto squared, Clover Ernest. But I doubt you'll see anything creative from someone so hidebound as the anonymous posters. Heinlein once wrote that critics are impartial because they hate all creative people equally, and this supports his statement. |
| 2018-06-23 13:21:17 | Panopticon | I've been a fan of your work for some time now, and I have to say that tis is really different from anything I have seen in a while. I'm being vague because I don't remember seeing anything like it ever, but I like old sci-fi and they did a lot of experiments... Keep up the good work and I'll be checking out the other site. |
| 2018-08-28 11:48:48 | What I Always Wanted Ch. 01_(1) | I had a look at the link from Blueberry Queen; there are similarities but I would judge it more as an adaptation than a theft. Given the writing style of this story, and the exaggerated drawing, stupid sound effects, and magic bunny in the hentai, I much prefer the story. I hope you will continue with this - let your own imagination decide where the story goes. |