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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-06-01 14:22:03 | HOBO Chapters 1,2 and 3 | I also got 'bad token' and when I left a message it said 'no such story', I assume because I hadn't logged in. I'm sorry to hear you were feeling poorly and I'm really glad you're back; you write well and with substance. This story promises to be another good one. I'm looking forward to seeing future chapters. |
| 2020-08-04 09:26:56 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4C | To paraphrase the old proverb, the better things are, the more they suck... I expected something with Taylor, probably prostitution, but not this. Chad can't keep one foot in each world: he will have to accept free sex on anyone's part, or abandon it himself. I'm looking forward to the next installment, and to your short story, which is a much more difficult fomat. |