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Comments from pyroclast
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-31 06:46:19 | Returning Chapter 03 | I was following this story, it was good and was building into what could have been memorable....but unfortunately the commercial realities of life intervened, and my reading stopped at the end of chapter 3. I searched Amazon, found the book, and tried to purchase....but they would not send to Australia; priced book at Amazon.com.au - $61.35, which was 3 times the US price. I decided to cut my losses and look for another fine author. |
| 2018-07-31 06:46:31 | Returning Chapter 03 | I was following this story, it was good and was building into what could have been memorable....but unfortunately the commercial realities of life intervened, and my reading stopped at the end of chapter 3. I searched Amazon, found the book, and tried to purchase....but they would not send to Australia; priced book at Amazon.com.au - $61.35, which was 3 times the US price. I decided to cut my losses and look for another fine author. |
| 2018-08-12 04:46:17 | THE MT. BEAVER CONDO COMPLEX CHRONICLES | Hey, Jimmie Boy! Interesting stories......but please do a bit more careful editing, I find that you tend to flip back and forth in person, one paragraph talking he or she/him or her, then the next talking I/me. Otherwise bloody good writing. |
| 2018-08-12 04:46:29 | THE MT. BEAVER CONDO COMPLEX CHRONICLES | Hey, Jimmie Boy! Interesting stories......but please do a bit more careful editing, I find that you tend to flip back and forth in person, one paragraph talking he or she/him or her, then the next talking I/me. Otherwise bloody good writing. |
| 2018-09-25 11:27:24 | PUSSY FEVER | Another good, positive story, Jimmie Boy! I do notice a tendency for some of your writing to be rather "clinical", like a report rather than a story. But in this case, yep, it seems to fit.. |