| 2018-12-23 12:06:35 |
D-I-Y
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Comment written in December 2018: This was a "young" senorlongo story, a rather immature effort that was all sex and perversion, not like his later works. Yes, it was great wank material for the demented, but a bit hard to take for the more mature. Fortunately, senorlongo grew up and began writing more-balanced sex stories, stories where the sex was the supportive aspect and not the main course. |
| 2018-12-26 02:56:26 |
My stepsister Lisa
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Ho hum, another formula-following effort even to the impossible hymen-up-the-birth -canal. So predictable, so boring. |
| 2018-12-26 03:13:11 |
Camille loved sex
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Written to a formula but avoided a number of pitfalls; developed into an interesting concept, escort rather than common prostitution. But why the hell the continuous underlining? |
| 2018-12-27 12:16:56 |
Everyone Loves Karen
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I got so pissed off with the beginning that I skipped most of it, and found the end just as bad. Some sick souls may like to read this filth, but, jeeez, who else? |
| 2019-01-16 16:44:45 |
S.H.E.I.L.A. 19
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Much better, pars; see if you can retain the "adult" tone and not fall back into that puerile crappy text again. |