| 2015-12-27 10:00:40 |
Sauna Session (Pt1)
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pretty good. but too many run-on sentences. or at least use a bit more punctuation. |
| 2015-12-27 11:09:49 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 04
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great story, but damn talk about a flame war. this isnt fucking youtube guys, grow the fuck up. seriously. |
| 2015-12-28 11:53:28 |
Superman gets some
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holy shit did not see THAT one coming. gotta remember this to share with my buddies at my university |
| 2015-12-29 12:55:46 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 06
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yet another awesome chapter. keep it up. |
| 2015-12-29 12:09:46 |
Bait and Switch Retype - Ch 03-04_(0)
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i know im a bit late, but its real depressing thinking about our beloved / admired Dark_Brother. hope the new author - his best fried - will recover well. still looking forward to finishing what i started, just like him. |