| 2015-09-14 14:29:08 |
Sean's Story: Chapter 6
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Oops... you got Sean and Josh mixed up there a little toward the end. Keep up with the great story tho. |
| 2015-09-13 18:13:58 |
Sean's Story: Chapter 5
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Lovin' it! |
| 2015-09-15 21:55:43 |
Sean's Story: Chapter 8
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This is my favorite series too. I need more please. |
| 2015-09-17 14:16:41 |
I am the Fountain of Youth - pt. 2
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Great story so far. Part 2 is a little short. One minor mistake. Maddie is 500 years old, but you said half a century... that would only be 50. It should be half a milennia. Looking forward to part 3. Keep up the great work. |
| 2015-09-18 01:54:24 |
Camping with my Niece (Part 2)
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Damn! You get me hot and wanting her pussy.... then leave me hanging. There better be more. |