| 2015-09-25 02:06:00 |
A MATERNAL AFFAIR-FULLY UPDATED
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Wow... what a great build to a fantastic climactic ending. I had to read the part where Debbie mounted Jake several times. I could feel her tight wet cunt sliding down my rod. Definitely a favorite. |
| 2015-09-25 16:45:32 |
Beach Photography Part 2.5
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The story was a little short, like my dick, but very hot, once again, like my dick. My mouth is watering.... Wishing for a salty meat stick to suck on. |
| 2015-09-25 17:47:57 |
Beach Photography Part 3_(0)
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You need to learn the use of pronouns. Repeating the boys' names ad-nauseum makes the story a little tedious. |
| 2015-09-25 17:54:03 |
The Time of our Lives
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Proof read next time. The story will sound as lackluster to you as it did to me. |
| 2015-09-25 21:43:24 |
Sex with J part1
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Hot fucking story.... Just work on paragraphs, please. |